Thursday, 3 November 2011

Flash Fiction Friday Nov. 4

Flash Fiction Friday
Welcome to this week’s Flash Fiction Friday. We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less. I am joined by some fabulous writers today who give their take on this picture. To see the other members click this blog link: Flasher Fiction Friday




Dave felt his vision blur almost as if he were in a tunnel. The room spun and the pressure behind his eyes made him feel he was about to pass out. He hadn’t had that much to drink and she was the reason for the spike in his blood pressure. He was so consumed by his anger that he barely felt Glenn’s large hand squeeze his thigh to bring him back to the moment.

She was gone and Dave could see the questions and confusion in his lover’s gentle eyes. It was time to come clean and reveal his secrets.

20 comments:

Sara York said...

OMG what secrets?

VenusBookluvr said...

I want to know his secrets! Don't leave me hanging.

Erika said...

Oooooo Nice one, I want to know what happens next.

Sherri Hayes said...

That doesn't sound like it's going to go over really well. Never a good idea to keep secrets. Nice FFF. :)

Lisa Worrall said...

oooooh - I need more now!

Bonni S. said...

Did he kill her? Is that the secret? Oooh nice one. I love the suspense.

Rawiya said...

Excellent FFF Cyril!

:D

Jade said...

Nooooo... How can you stop just there!! I need to know his secret! Great post, even if I'm still wondering what he's hidding!

Lindsey said...

Oh, the secrets! Great hook. Love it!

Lindsey said...

Oh, the secrets! Great hook.

Benjamin Tiberius Russell said...

Oh Hell Yes, I think there have been studies to prove that women cause high blood pressure. I empathize with his pain, suffering and deep anguish.

In other words, I liked it - very Cool Cyril, very cool indeed

gemma parkes said...

intriguing 100! Great!

Havan said...

And his secrets are _______________

I'm waiting patiently! Terrific! :D

Author Cyril J. Michael said...

Hmm, I think I'll have to turn this one into a full length story ;-)

Davee said...

Wow, I enjoyed how you brought together the elements of lust, mystery, and how they affect a relationship. Nice FFF!

Heaven Liegh said...

You must finish this Cyril. I have to know what happens next even if it means I have to tie you to your computer chair. What secrets does he have? Who is the girl to him. UHG. I vote for flash fiction fridays to be 200 words!

Author Cyril J. Michael said...

Tying me to my computer chair sounds like a great idea Heaven!

LunaEllaAldora said...

Secrets, deception...is it a secret of his own making or was it forced upon him? I wonder...might he be innocent even so? I want to hug and offer comfort to his lover with the gentle eyes, for I've been there for devastating news a time or two and know that kind of blow. How will it turn out??

~Luna

Anonymous said...

OOOh Cyril. Is Glenn a guy? Is that the secret? Is it why she left? Very nice mystery! Patti Logan

Katie Harper said...

You can't open a can like that without explanation! That was just cruel. Brilliant, but cruel.

GREAT JOB!!