Thursday, 16 February 2012

Flash Fiction Friday

Flash Fiction Friday
Welcome to this week’s Flash Fiction Friday. We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less. I am joined by some fabulous writers today who give their take on this picture. To see the other members click this blog link: Flasher Fiction Friday


She was really pissing him off now.

Ryan seemed to be basking in the glory of her child-like infatuation. He would probably enjoy her company too if she hadn’t ruined the plans he’d made for tonight. This weekend getaway was turning into a bust. He was still trying to figure out how she had invited herself along on their romantic retreat when he walked into the bar. Suddenly she stopped her fawning over his mate and zeroed in on the handsome stranger. With a whimper and moan she was gone in a flash and things were looking up for him.

14 comments:

ERP said...

Ugh, I'm glad she's gone! Hope they can salvage their weekend without her!

Kendel Davi said...

Use the tension to bring on the heat. Very nice, Cyril.

Horrorwritingdaddy said...

Hmm, so what haopens now that she is gone?

Cassandre Dayne said...

Oh yeah - I can see where this one is going to go

Naomi said...

Good riddance to her! It's awful when someone muscles in on your time. Good one!

C R Guiliano said...

Glad she's not all over his mate now. Let her find her own. Great post.

Davee said...

At least it sounds like they got rid of the third wheel...

Sara York said...

Nice, handsome stranger to the rescue! Love this FFF.

Benjamin Tiberius Russell said...

It seems that in this case, three is definitely a crowd. Perhaps the next time, he'll tell her to keep her butt at home. Nicely done.

gemma parkes said...

Hm, well things don't always turn out as planned, the little minx!

Yvonne Nicolas said...

So maybe it's not such a bust afterall. ^_^ Cool post.

Rolling Muse In The Roses said...

I hope they can salvage the weekend after this. Great post! :)

Lisa Worrall said...

Thank god for handsome strangers!
Loved it :)

Bonni S. said...

It's a good thing she left before he removed her. Excellent post!