Friday, 23 March 2012

Flash Fiction Friday

We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less.

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Jacob felt like a complete pansy-ass! Here he was tearing up like a chick on the rag watching those stupid old Hallmark commercials.
The tattoo Chad had refused to let him see until it healed bought tears to Jacob’s eyes. It was one of Jacob’s original paintings and his man would now permanently sport a piece of his soul. It only seemed fair, as Chad’d left his mark permanently on Jacob’s heart.
Jacob wrapped his hand around his lover’s neck and pulled him in for a gentle kiss, letting his eye’s say what he just couldn’t bring himself to admit.

10 comments:

Muffy Wilson said...

Oh, touching. I loved this Cyril, so hearfelt and beautifully written.:) xo

Horrorwritingdaddy said...

So much emotion in only 100 words. Fantastic!

Lee Brazil said...

Love this! SO sweet and evocative!

S. J. Maylee said...

"letting his eye's say what he just couldn't bring himself to admit"

oh, I love it!! what a moment

For Your Eyes Only~Author Lani Rhea said...

Oh wow! What a stolen moment! Loved your FFF!

Bonni S. said...

How romantic. And yes. I do cry at Halmark card commercials. Loved your FFF!

Naomi said...

Aww so romantic! I love a touch of romance. Great flasher

Lisa Worrall said...

I'm tearing up along with him! So heartfelt, so emotional. Loved it!

BLMorticia said...

Cyril, great FFF! I loved it

SLira

Yvonne Nicolas said...

You’re trying to make me tear up Cyril? ^_^ What a touching piece and it fit perfectly with the image. Such a sweet post.