Friday, 30 March 2012

Flash Fiction Friday

We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less.

To see the other members click this blog link: Flasher Fiction Friday

This is a continuation , well background really, about two characters I introduced a few weeks back. I hope you enjoy it!




Tate was a klutz and he’d never regretted it more than when he bent to retrieve the stack of Trevor’s files he’d just knocked over. The photo was a surprise that instantly flooded him with desire and revulsion. The night Trevor asked him to dress like a private school attendee had been one of the sexiest of Tate’s life; he’d gone beyond his comfort zone and loved it.

As he bent to pick up more files his heart sank as he discovered dozens more photos. It would seem he wasn’t Trevor’s only school boy. Seemed he had lots of students.

13 comments:

Cassandre Dayne said...

I love that you've continued this. Very different take on it altogether. It's sexy and longing to have more as well. Excellent.

ERP said...

awww. How disappointing to not be the only one. Sigh. So, what is he going to do now?
Excellent flash CJM

Kendel Davi said...

This was a great way to use the image and the emotional context really flavors your 100 words.

Davee said...

oh no, what started to be a pleasant memory turned dark very rapidly. wow, heartfelt FFF nice

Bonni S. said...

A good memory gone bad. Loved your take on the photo.

Patricia Logan said...

Nicely done, Cyril with a great twist!

gemma parkes said...

I love the way you've used a photograph interpretation, very effective 100!

Lee Brazil said...

Oh my, nice 100- poor guy.

S. J. Maylee said...

his heart sank, man oh man, ouch
so did mine, cool flash

Muffy Wilson said...

I love the simple way you brought the photo into into a relationship and not a captured moment voyeured by many. Of course, you did that, too, and so Tate is hearbroken. Very craftfully drawn. I loved this and really felt for Tate. Give us somemore, again. Bravo:) xo

For Your Eyes Only~Author Lani Rhea said...

Awwww, poor guy. I'd so go show the other men just so they know not to mess with the Fhead again! Great FFF!

VenusBookluvr said...

Heartbreaking!
Great FFF.

BLMorticia said...

Wow, what a different take. Nicely done