Flash Fiction Friday
Welcome to this week’s Flash Fiction Friday.
We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less. I am joined by some fabulous writers today who give their take on this picture. To see the other members click this blog link: Flasher Fiction Friday
He couldn’t take hearing her annoying tone one moment longer – it was like fingernails on a chalkboard. Her incessant chatter was driving him absolutely, friggin’ crazy.
And she was doing it on purpose.
“If you promise to shut up and stop nagging me I’ll ask your brother out.”
Her triumphant smirk made him smile. “I mean damn girl, what are you his pimp now?” She rolled her eyes and when I removed my hand from her mouth, thankfully she remained silent. But I knew if I didn’t make good on my promise soon the torture would start all over again.
13 comments:
Great flasher. You should carry on with this story
Love the unexpected and that she was looking out for her brother. Nicely done!!
What a great sister. I would never set one of my brothers up. I know them too well. ;)
GREAT JOB!!
Oh yes, what happens on their date? I so want to know!
Well, that one way to get someone to shut up. *grin* Great post!
Loved your take on this Cyril!
nagging sisters, sheesh! lol. nice FFF
What a good sister! Great post CJM
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Incessant and nagging...hey, it worked, didn't it? I bet he has a great time on the date! Nice, Cyril.
Sisters know how to get what they want...lol :)
Loved this. Awesome job! :)
I agree, You should carry on with this story. It has the makings of a really good short. Anyway something to think about.
Cute! I agree you need to give us more.
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