Friday 6 January 2012

Flash Fiction Friday

Welcome to this week’s Flash Fiction Friday


We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less. I am joined by some fabulous writers today who give their take on this picture. To see how others perceive this image click this blog link: Flasher Fiction Friday


Jessa was his first plus-size model. She was fabulous, with none of the usual ego he was used to dealing with. Her ease at following his directions was almost too good to be true. He’d seen the gleam of awareness in her eyes. This usually set off warning bells. Rick was surprised to find his body responding. Last night when he’d been reviewing proofs in bed Dan had commented how lovely she was and it was a shame Rick never wanted to bring his work home with him. Jessa seemed to be the exception to all his rules and conventions.

20 comments:

Jean Joachim Books said...

Do I sense a menage coming? Very clever!

Cassandre Dayne said...

Very nicely done - love the thought processes

Naomi Shaw said...

Very well done. You set the mood just right. Nice one

S.Lira said...

OOh I love this Cyril. Write it. A menage, love that!

Jade said...

It looks like Jessa will have a wonderful evening..night?? Lucky woman!
Great post!

Lee Brazil said...

Oh, I do hope She's as open minded as Dan! Great post!

ERP said...

Wonderful inner machinations. Great FFF CJM.

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Luna Ella Aldora said...

I hope Jessa takes both men by storm! Tempting one, Cyril! ;)

Bonni S. said...

I love menage posts. Nicely done!

YvonneNicolas said...

Oooo, what a sexy twist! I like where you’re going with this. You may have to continue this story on another FFF. *brows wiggling* Such a seductive post. ;)

Katie Harper said...

When I grow up, I want to be Jessa. ;)

GREAT JOB!!

Anonymous said...

Ohhhh, she has it made and doesn't even know it yet! Hot! Loved your FFF!

Unknown said...

Dammit, Katie took the words right out of my mouth! I love menage books. I think it's very cool that he felt his body respond not only to her body but to her attitude and confidence. Well done, Cyril!

Rolling Muse in The Roses said...

Yummmm, purrfectly done. Wow got me warm and fuzzy. :)

Sherri Hayes said...

Loved how he complimented her not only on her beauty, but also on how she had that subtle sexiness about her. Nice FFF. :)

Benjamin T. Russell said...

Every rule is made to be broken and it sounds like breaking this rule will result in something special for all concerned. Now, how does he get her to go along for the proverbial ride? Nicely done.

Anonymous said...

A perfect lead up to a nice encounter. Very well done!

Davee Jones said...

nice how you captured the sexual awareness of human nature. sexy FFF

Sancre Darling aka S.E. Darling said...

Now this is gonna be interesting...she may have her hands full...lolol. Sexy, sexy...two men and a lot of woman! lol.

VenusBookluvr said...

This begs for more. I think you need to write this story!!