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Heart breaking, Adam gazed across the chasm at his sister.
Eve looked so dejected and he felt entirely helpless. Even though distance separated
them he could almost feel her pain and loneliness. Her despair engulfed her and
enveloped Adam. Their mother had always resented the deep connection the
siblings shared. In a malicious outburst she had convinced their father to separate
them. Eve spent her time among the austere land of the desert protecting their
father’s worshippers. Adam spent his time among the lush blooming forest
protecting their mother’s followers and fearing for his sister’s sanity with
each passing moment.
9 comments:
So sad, I feel for Eve.Great flasher
I see and feel this moment for so many angles, well done!
Oh, I hope you continue this! Sounds like a great premise for a fantasy.
I'm with Angelica. You should expand this. Great flasher.
Great flash
I agree with Bonni and Angelica you need to continue this!
Wonderful Flasher.
Lovely post. I agree with the others I think you have the start of a wonderful story here.
Oh wow, what a flasher. So much sadness and so unfair for them to be separated.
Oh, no, what an evil father. It hurts to think of their separation.
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