Friday, 27 January 2012

Flash Fiction Friday January 27

Flash Fiction

Welcome to this week’s Flash Fiction Friday. A picture may be worth a thousand words but not for us. We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less. I am joined by some fabulous writers today who give their take on this picture. To see the other members click this blog link: Flasher Fiction Friday




Dane was acting like a petulant child.

This night was important, Tim was being honoured by his peers and clients yet Dane decided to throw one of his famous fits because it wasn’t all about him. Tim had suggested Dane wear the Calvin Klein tux rather than the Ralph Lauren and that quickly his lover had striped himself naked and then silently sat in the foyer.

With a beleaguered sigh, he grabbed his overcoat and took one last glance in the mirror to ensure his suit was impeccable, thinking this was what he got for dating a much younger man.

19 comments:

Naomi said...

this could go places, good one

BLMorticia said...

I like it Cyril, it does look like a much bigger story! Great work,

SLira

Lee Brazil said...

I'm sure the relationship has its rewards...Great post!

Jade said...

So Tim is going by himself? Good for him. Maybe when he'll be back, Dane will make everything in his power to be forgiven... And the night will end up "nicely"
Great post!

Kendel Davi said...

Good work with a nice reveal to keep up in it! Youth, the killer of adult fun.

Muffy Wilson said...

I hate tantrums, but they always lead to great make-up sex. Me thinks that Tim will be coming home to ...lengthly....apologies:) xo

Sara York said...

Oh no he didn't. Dump his skinny white ass.

Jean said...

I like the way you painted the discrepancy in maturity. Well done!

Lisa Worrall said...

Ah - the perils of youngsters.
I hope he left the little snotnose on the table!

Benjamin Tiberius Russell said...

Sometimes common sense is lost on the young. So if a woman who dates a younger man is called a cougar, what is a man called that dates a younger man??

Yvonne Nicolas said...

LOL! That's what my son does when he doesn't want to wear something. He strips and pouts. That was an extra funny post. Love it.

Jp Archer said...

Okay. I don't care who you are, that kind of behavior should be done by the time your twelve. Tim needs to ditch the bitch and find a real man. Good work.

ERP said...

ugh what a brat.

Dump him and find a new man!

Rolling Muse In The Roses said...

:) loved this! Great FFF!

Bonni S. said...

He should grow up and put on the damn suit. Great post!

VenusBookluvr said...

The down side of being a Sugar Daddy! Nice FFF!

Havan said...

There must be something about him that is lovable - or else he wouldn't be there right? lol Great FFF!

Luna Ella Aldora said...

Now, now be careful ratting on the young. That young man might just show up to the event after all, just as he is now! Wouldn't that make for a memorable ceremony? ;)

gemma parkes said...

Ha! Loved it, l can see him sulking there.Great flash!