Friday, 20 January 2012

Flash Fiction Friday

Flash Fiction Friday

Welcome to this week’s Flash Fiction Friday.

We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less. I am joined by some fabulous writers today who give their take on this picture. To see the other members click this blog link: Flasher Fiction Friday





He couldn’t take hearing her annoying tone one moment longer – it was like fingernails on a chalkboard. Her incessant chatter was driving him absolutely, friggin’ crazy.

And she was doing it on purpose.

“If you promise to shut up and stop nagging me I’ll ask your brother out.”

Her triumphant smirk made him smile. “I mean damn girl, what are you his pimp now?” She rolled her eyes and when I removed my hand from her mouth, thankfully she remained silent. But I knew if I didn’t make good on my promise soon the torture would start all over again.

13 comments:

Naomi said...

Great flasher. You should carry on with this story

Jean said...

Love the unexpected and that she was looking out for her brother. Nicely done!!

Katie Harper said...

What a great sister. I would never set one of my brothers up. I know them too well. ;)

GREAT JOB!!

Sara York said...

Oh yes, what happens on their date? I so want to know!

Yvonne Nicolas said...

Well, that one way to get someone to shut up. *grin* Great post!

gemma parkes said...

Loved your take on this Cyril!

Davee said...

nagging sisters, sheesh! lol. nice FFF

ERP said...

What a good sister! Great post CJM

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Luna Ella Aldora said...

Incessant and nagging...hey, it worked, didn't it? I bet he has a great time on the date! Nice, Cyril.

Havan said...

Sisters know how to get what they want...lol :)

Rolling Muse In The Roses said...

Loved this. Awesome job! :)

Bonni S. said...

I agree, You should carry on with this story. It has the makings of a really good short. Anyway something to think about.

VenusBookluvr said...

Cute! I agree you need to give us more.