Thursday, 23 August 2012

Flash Fiction Friday -- The Pack

We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less.

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The Pack
He’d only been gone a few minutes and there was a strange woman in bed with his lover. Domenic seemed to be touching her in a professional manner after all, he was a chiropractor. Why had she come to his bedroom and not his patient rooms next door? When Jed took an angry step towards the bed a deep growl alerted him to the man in the corner. Jed hadn’t noticed him or the two others with him. When Dom had tried to explain how close the pack was Jed couldn’t comprehend it, now he was seeing the big picture.

7 comments:

Naomi said...

Is Dom enjoying this or is there something else underlying as the pack was so close. Jed had better watch out. There is definitely a longer and quite story here. Or is it my imagination running wild?

gemma parkes said...

Difficult situation! Great flash.

S. J. Maylee said...

Intriguing. Some many different threads of interest here. Jed and Dom and the woman and the three men waiting for her. My mind keeps swirling the picture in my head all around. Very nice.

diannehartsock said...

Sounds dangerous, almost like becoming involved with the Mob. Hope they stay safe! Great flash. :)

VenusBookluvr said...

A lot going on here. I want to know more. Fantastic Flasher.

Patricia Logan said...

I'd love to see more of this story. Well done!

Rolling Muse in The Roses said...

Wow great flash. Have me hooked. I want to know more. Great job!