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The Pack
He’d only been gone a few minutes
and there was a strange woman in bed with his lover. Domenic seemed to be
touching her in a professional manner after all, he was a chiropractor. Why had
she come to his bedroom and not his patient rooms next door? When Jed took an
angry step towards the bed a deep growl alerted him to the man in the corner.
Jed hadn’t noticed him or the two others with him. When Dom had tried to explain
how close the pack was Jed couldn’t comprehend it, now he was seeing the big
picture.
7 comments:
Is Dom enjoying this or is there something else underlying as the pack was so close. Jed had better watch out. There is definitely a longer and quite story here. Or is it my imagination running wild?
Difficult situation! Great flash.
Intriguing. Some many different threads of interest here. Jed and Dom and the woman and the three men waiting for her. My mind keeps swirling the picture in my head all around. Very nice.
Sounds dangerous, almost like becoming involved with the Mob. Hope they stay safe! Great flash. :)
A lot going on here. I want to know more. Fantastic Flasher.
I'd love to see more of this story. Well done!
Wow great flash. Have me hooked. I want to know more. Great job!
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