Thursday, 3 May 2012

Flash Fiction Friday

We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less.

To see the other members click this blog link: Flasher Fiction Friday




“Darla what the hell have you done this time?” Stewart surveyed his once impeccable condo and regretted, not for the first time, letting his flighty sister temporarily move in with him. She’d been nothing but a headache to him from the moment she showed up with her well-worn duffel bag and her latest unemployment woes. Darla’s disruption to his normal routine caused him a relationship, not that he was upset to see Peter leave but he’d lost a few clients too. Family was family.

“Why does my place look like a tacky eastern brothel and where is all my furniture?”



11 comments:

Savannah Chase said...

Oh she must have had a hell of a good time...Fantastic post.

Horrorwritingdaddy said...

Incredibly well written. So much conveyed in just 100 words. I am very impressed.

ER Pierce said...

Cool Flash CJM -- What the hell happened! LOL

Sometimes family is... sigh.

Kendel Davi said...

That's right. Family. You gotta love them. Great Flash!

S. J. Maylee said...

He must really love his sister, good man!! Fun Flash!! I'm smiling :D

Muffy Wilson said...

Oh, Cyril! Wonderful flash! I loved it! It brought back memories!!!:) xo

gemma parkes said...

Ha! Great flash, it fits the picture perfectly!

Lee Brazil said...

LOL- great flash. Wondered what direction people would take with this photo!

VenusBookluvr said...

Great Flash!
Loved your take on this photo.

Leann Mitchell said...

Ah, the irritation of having family live with you. That was fun! Great flash!

Bonni S. said...

Oh how fun this one is. Look out bro, I'm taking over. Great post!