Friday, 25 May 2012

Flash Fiction Friday

We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less.

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Jay couldn’t believe his eyes. The wolf had never been around before he would have definitely noticed. Jay really wanted to walk up to the beast and see just how friendly he was. He looked intelligent, stunning with piercing eyes. They reminded him of the gorgeous man he’d seen the other night at his club. His heart started beating faster as he recalled the warmth of the other man’s touch. Jay had never seen him before, he definitely would have remembered him also. He laughed at the fact he was stiffing just standing here remembering a man he’d barely glanced.

12 comments:

Leann Mitchell said...

Nice FFF! I like the added supernatural element of the warewolf. Very nice.

Muffy Wilson said...

The parallel between the wolf and the man was a facinating, foreboding touch. Made me wary and wanting to warn him all wasn't as it seemed. And all within 100 words! Well done, Cyril!

Cassandre Dayne said...

I love the supernatural element to this but it is also a beautiful snap into what he's feeling and wanting. Nicely done.

Cassandre Dayne said...

I love the supernatural element to this but it is also a beautiful snap into what he's feeling and wanting. Nicely done.

S. J. Maylee said...

you captured an intriguing moment with this new lust. Love the line where he compares the eyes of the man and the wolf.

Savannah Chase said...

Great FFF. Love the wolf...Great job.

VenusBookluvr said...

Nice FFF! Love the set up!

ER Pierce said...

CJM -- Cool paranormal intro. I can see a story brewing. Nice

Benjamin Tiberius Russell said...

Hmm, a wolf in stud clothing. I think Jay needs to be careful, there have been strange things happening on that bridge. Men have lost important parts of their bodies on this bridge - arrrrghh.

Kendel Davi said...

Very nice, Cyril! The wolf, the man, the hunger! All displayed very well.

Kim Faulks said...

love the Were take on this one, leaves you wanting more. Well done.

Sherry Palmer said...

I enjoyed this alot. He better beware that wolf may be looking for more than just a good meal. Well in that case it might be a good thing. Hope he shifts into his real form soon.