Friday, 22 June 2012

Flash Fiction Friday

We have a picture about which we write a story of 100 words, no more and no less.

To see the other members click this blog link: Flasher Fiction Friday


 
Heart breaking, Adam gazed across the chasm at his sister. Eve looked so dejected and he felt entirely helpless. Even though distance separated them he could almost feel her pain and loneliness. Her despair engulfed her and enveloped Adam. Their mother had always resented the deep connection the siblings shared. In a malicious outburst she had convinced their father to separate them. Eve spent her time among the austere land of the desert protecting their father’s worshippers. Adam spent his time among the lush blooming forest protecting their mother’s followers and fearing for his sister’s sanity with each passing moment.

9 comments:

Naomi said...

So sad, I feel for Eve.Great flasher

S. J. Maylee said...

I see and feel this moment for so many angles, well done!

Angelica Dawson said...

Oh, I hope you continue this! Sounds like a great premise for a fantasy.

Bonni S. said...

I'm with Angelica. You should expand this. Great flasher.

vampiremorbius said...

Great flash

VenusBookluvr said...

I agree with Bonni and Angelica you need to continue this!
Wonderful Flasher.

Veronica Fredricks said...

Lovely post. I agree with the others I think you have the start of a wonderful story here.

Savannah Chase said...

Oh wow, what a flasher. So much sadness and so unfair for them to be separated.

Davee said...

Oh, no, what an evil father. It hurts to think of their separation.