Monday, 30 April 2012

Tantalizing Teaser #2

Tantalizing Tuesday is all about writing 200 word Tantalizing Teasers, inspired by a personal picture prompt to post on Tuesdays. The emphasis is on having fun, pictures can be anything that takes our fancy. I hope you enjoy what we have to offer.

Please check out my fellow authors this week:
Naomi Shaw:
Julez S Morbius:
Molly Synthia:
Lee Brazil:
Dianne Hartsock:
Venus Cahill:
Leann Mitchell
Cyril J. Michael:
ER Pierce
Benjamin T. Russell
Bonni Sansom:
Gemma Parkes:
Cassandre Dayne:
Havan Fellows:
Muffy Wilson:
Don Abdul:
Ray Sostre:

Owen was both frightened and ashamed of the excitement he was feeling. He was bombarded with a myriad of emotions, reactions and sensations. Guilt and embarrassment were at the forefront but he also experienced a sense of euphoria. The anticipation was almost overwhelming and he felt lightheaded by the rush of it all. He’d never really had any secret fantasies and had always considered himself to be very vanilla in his tastes. Yet he’d never been so turned on in his whole life. This powerful man before him had turned over all the power and placed himself at Owen’s mercy. Owen did not want to dominate, hurt or humiliate him in any way. He wanted to pleasure him knowing that it would give himself pleasure as well. That amount of trust was scary, awe inspiring! No one had ever shown that much faith in him. This wonderful man not only said the words but followed the sentiments up with undeniable actions. Owen had been afraid to put himself on the line, to put his heart out there and yet he’d just been told in no uncertain terms that it would be in safe keeping should he decide to extend it.


Muffy Wilson said...

Oh, wow, Cyril! Beautiful, big boy pic and matching sentiment. How beautifuly executed!:) xo

diannehartsock said...

Wow. Beautifully written. He almost sounds humbled by the man's faith in him. Love this! I want to know more about them. :)

Molly Synthia said...

Very nice. It's a definite teaser because I'm hungry for more about the characters. Great!

Naomi Shaw said...

Wonderful teaser. You leave me wanting to know more about both characters, why they are in this situation and what's going to happen. You did an awesome job in 200 words.

Lee Brazil said...

Great characters...nice sense of realization of the meaning of the power dynamic. Owen's moment of self discovery is fascinating-

Julian Spong said...

Brilliantly written

Leann Mitchell said...

Another beautifully written teaser.

Cassandre Dayne said...

Oh I know the feelings well. I loved the tension yet his words were freeing for him as if his heart and soul was no longer captive.

ER Pierce said...

Lovely TTT CJM. I loved how you captured Owens uncertainty, but also the freedom. Well done.

Bonni S. said...

It's definitely a teaser. I wanted more. Too bad it can't be more than 200. Great post!

Havan said...

Cyril, I think I love Owen. He is so almost innocent like, but I know when he gets started there will be no innocent administrations...this is wonderfully done. :)

Nichelle Gregory said...

Hot pic and flash! Well done.

VenusBookluvr said...

Fantastic. I want more!!