Tantalizing Tuesday is all about writing 200 word Tantalizing Teasers, inspired by a personal picture prompt to post on Tuesdays. The emphasis is on having fun, pictures can be anything that takes our fancy. I hope you enjoy what we have to offer.
Please check out my fellow authors this week:
Naomi Shaw: http://naomisfantasies.wordpress.com
Julez S Morbius: http://morbiussworld.blogspot.co.uk/
Molly Synthia: http://mollysynthia.com
Lee Brazil: http://leebrazilauthor.blogspot.com
Dianne Hartsock: http://diannehartsock.wordpress.com/tantalizing-tuesday/
Venus Cahill: http://www.venusbookluvr.blogspot.ca
Leann Mitchell http://leannmitchell.blogspot.com
Cyril J. Michael: http://authorcyriljmichaels.blogspot.ca/
ER Pierce http://www.erpierce.com
Benjamin T. Russell http://incubuschronicles.blogspot.com
Bonni Sansom: http://bonnisansom.blogspot.com/
Gemma Parkes: http://gemmaparkes.blogspot.com/
Cassandre Dayne: http://cassandredayne.wordpress.com/
Havan Fellows: http://havanshawthaven.blogspot.com
Muffy Wilson: http://MuffyWislon.blogspot.com
Don Abdul: http://don-abdul.blogspot.com/
Ray Sostre: http://theafterdarkworld.blogspot.com
Owen was both frightened and ashamed of the
excitement he was feeling. He was bombarded with a myriad of emotions,
reactions and sensations. Guilt and embarrassment were at the forefront but he also
experienced a sense of euphoria. The anticipation was almost overwhelming and
he felt lightheaded by the rush of it all. He’d never really had any secret
fantasies and had always considered himself to be very vanilla in his tastes.
Yet he’d never been so turned on in his whole life. This powerful man before
him had turned over all the power and placed himself at Owen’s mercy. Owen did
not want to dominate, hurt or humiliate him in any way. He wanted to pleasure
him knowing that it would give himself pleasure as well. That amount of trust
was scary, awe inspiring! No one had ever shown that much faith in him. This
wonderful man not only said the words but followed the sentiments up with
undeniable actions. Owen had been afraid to put himself on the line, to put his
heart out there and yet he’d just been told in no uncertain terms that it would
be in safe keeping should he decide to extend it.
13 comments:
Oh, wow, Cyril! Beautiful, big boy pic and matching sentiment. How beautifuly executed!:) xo
Wow. Beautifully written. He almost sounds humbled by the man's faith in him. Love this! I want to know more about them. :)
Very nice. It's a definite teaser because I'm hungry for more about the characters. Great!
Wonderful teaser. You leave me wanting to know more about both characters, why they are in this situation and what's going to happen. You did an awesome job in 200 words.
Great characters...nice sense of realization of the meaning of the power dynamic. Owen's moment of self discovery is fascinating-
Brilliantly written
Another beautifully written teaser.
Oh I know the feelings well. I loved the tension yet his words were freeing for him as if his heart and soul was no longer captive.
Lovely TTT CJM. I loved how you captured Owens uncertainty, but also the freedom. Well done.
It's definitely a teaser. I wanted more. Too bad it can't be more than 200. Great post!
Cyril, I think I love Owen. He is so almost innocent like, but I know when he gets started there will be no innocent administrations...this is wonderfully done. :)
Hot pic and flash! Well done.
Fantastic. I want more!!
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